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Winston, sien asb. https://af.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Geselshoekie#Ons_Wikipedia_se_15de_verjaarsdag.21 Ek kort jou insae asb! Groete! [[Gebruiker:Oesjaar|Oesjaar]] ([[Gebruikerbespreking:Oesjaar|kontak]]) 10:04, 3 Augustus 2016 (UTC)
 
== Dankie en opmerking (Libië) ==
 
Hello Winstonza. Thanks very much for improving the article on the Copts in Libya. I'm just a Dutchman doing his best to write in Afrikaans occasionally, and I already expected some editing would be needed. Nevertheless, there is one new phrase which I'm quite sure doesn't match the info in the sources. Under "Nasleep", it now says: "''Minstens 20 000 Egiptenare het uit Libië gevlug in die dae ná die bekendmaking van die aanval.''"This suggests that the Egyptian Army's attacks on IS camps in Libya sparked the exodus. But the given source reports that the Egyptians started leaving Libya earlier, that is: after the news of the bloodbath emerged ("''Zo'n twintigduizend Egyptenaren zijn Libië ontvlucht sinds daar eerder deze maand 21 koptische christenen uit Egypte werden onthoofd door terreurbeweging Islamitische Staat.''"). Also, the scene on Sirte's beach can not be described as an attack. So I think, 'aanval' should be replaced by 'moorde' or some equivalent. What do you think about this? [[Gebruiker:Apdency|Apdency]] ([[Gebruikerbespreking:Apdency|kontak]]) 17:14, 11 Augustus 2016 (UTC)