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Stukkende eksterne skakel
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/hc200.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 2
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/hc300.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 3
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/hc401.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 4
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- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/hc403.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 5
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/hc700.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 6
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/rt101.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 7
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/ii103.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 8
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/ii410.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 9
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.monuments-nationaux.fr/fichier/plug_download/209/download_fichier_fr_rapport.annuel.2006.pdf
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 10
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/vv401.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 11
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/ii310.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 12
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/ii330.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 13
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- http://www.fuaj.org/fra/auberges/aj_fiche.php?aj_id=156 (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 14
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.carcassonne.culture.fr/culture/carcassonne/fr/fa1dc.htm (archive)
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Stukkende eksterne skakel 15
wysigDuring several automated bot runs the following external link was found to be unavailable. Please check if the link is in fact down and fix or remove it in that case!
- http://www.aadel.org/pays_cathare/fichiers/les_sites/carcass_2005.pdf (archive)
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Hulp asseblief
wysigEk het die teks bietjie probeer nagaan, maar ek raai daar is heelwat dinge wat steeds verbeter kan word.
As voorbeelde, sal ek hulp waardeer met hierdie dele:
- "tekste en verdar van amptenare"
- "Ander soos Achille Rouquet of François de Neufchâteau, keur die baie Gotiese styl en die sterk stempel wat Viollet-le-Duc op die veranderinge afgedruk het." - Kort "af" aan die einde, of is die styl en stempel gekeur?
- "In 1926 is die beskerming van die historiese monumente uitgebrei deur die klassifikasie van terrein by die oorblyfsels van die barbacane de l'Aude, die accès en die Aude-poort, asook die Grand Puits (Groot Put)." - Iets kort êrens, maar ek weet nie mooi wat nie.
- "Joël Bousquet, kommandeur van die légion d'honneur, was hoogs verontwaardig oor die besetting en het per brief aan die préfet aangedring op die bevryding van die Cité wat wêreldwyd as 'n kunswerk beskou is respek betoon moes word en vry gelaat moes word." Te lank en kompleks vir my, maar ek is redelik seker hier kort ook iets.
- "Dit is gebou uit eenvormige klippe en steen rye. Die stene het die stabiliteit van die konstruksie verseker as gevolg van die buigsaamheid daarvan en opvul van moontlike insinkings.".
- "Daar bestaan steeds 17 torings van Gallo-Romeinse oorsprong wat min of meer oor die dertig torings wat aanvanklik deel gevorm het vestingmuur." - Ek dink hier kort 'n werkwoord of iets.
- "heerlikhede (seigneurs)" - Elders word dit as "landhere" aangegee. Maak dit saak? "Heerlikhede" klink vir my in elk geval so bietjie soos lekker vrugte in die somer ;-)
Bring gerus verbeteringe direk aan die teks aan. Ek is nou pootuit. --Alias (kontak) 18:43, 27 Julie 2016 (UTC)
Hoeveelheid Frans
wysigDaar is nogal heelwat Frans wat in die artikel se teks gebruik word, en dit is nogal vermoeiend om te lees. As voorbeeld:
- "maar Raymond VII van Toulouse en sy comtes de Foix het teen hom saamgesweer"
Ek weet nie hoekom die Franse frase gebruik word nie, en verstaan ook nie die sin nie. Die frase word nêrens elders gebruik of verklaar nie. Dit kommunikeer dus nie werklik effektief nie. Ek hoop iemand kan hieraan verbeter! --Alias (kontak) 18:43, 27 Julie 2016 (UTC)